Here in the rain

by heartbrk1   Jul 6, 2007


As i stand here in the rain
holding the razor to cut open
the vein, yes i know it won't last long
and that your tried of hearing bout my sad song
you say my pain aint worth shit
but.......in my heart.......rock bottom i've hit
with every new girl it all ends the same
im the one who gets all the pain
its my heart that is slain
so here i stand in the rain
with this razor i used to cut open my vein

and forever end my pain

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  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    I dont really like this one to be honest, because you can get so much deeper messages and like, while reading your poetry I get a strong sense that you do have a lot of theories or answers to why t hese things happen...this one just doesnt cut it for me, and i dont think it flows as well as ur other ones, but thats not to say that it is still very good.

  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    ^_^ nice work I loved it!! had really nice flow to it

  • 16 years ago

    by Nula

    I love this poem....check mine leave a comment i will appreciate it

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Whoa...this poem is so raw and has alot of deep emotions runing through it..i luv it:D
    yet i can relate to it so easily...since i now find it hard to give my heart up to someone becuz its been broken b4...well u can say..i have hit rock bottom:D
    tk care bree x

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