God's revenge

by DragonRebornedInBrokenMirror   Jul 7, 2007


The God came down to Earth
to shoot the Angel that got away
from Heaven.

She was the Devils lover,
consumed by his dark power,
and God just couldn't stand that.

He wanted the Devils power
for himself,
so he bought a gun.

The beautiful angel is bleeding now,
in the darkened lane,
she's no longer breathing.

God wanted to shoot the Devil, too
so he looked in the mirror,
and pulled the trigger.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    A very unusual topic and I think you show your guts by sharing your opinion on this subject. I do not agree with you, but that's ok we all have a right to our own beliefs, don't we?

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Seemed more like a story than a poem to me, but it was well written, with good wording.

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Really an excellent writing.......

    Nazeer

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Im confused i dont understand why this poem was down voting but i can see u deserve to have 5/5.. there is a great message to all readers u have the great imagination

    great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    Another good dark poem. I liked your other one better, but this is still an awesome write. The ending was so so original. 5/5
    ~ Lainey

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