Hey good poem you did a good job once again im glad you told me about this poem lol good job i like the flow and the emotion in this, and also the fact that this happens to people sometimes so good job :D:D

keenan

Thats so sad! nice job 5/5

Another superb poem from you. This is 100% poetic and nicely flowing. The rhymes are good and it is very well penned. Poetic and lexically strong.

Tc
Fsams

~wow~ this poem broke my heart sounds true hope it isnt =) Great poem

Noelle

I like this very much.. i dont know how to explain how i feel about it.. but i did rate it a 5

I thought this was very touching and sad at the same time, but at times I found it to be more like a story.
I liked the imagery you painted in this, it was beas beautiful.

Soo sad!! :(
did you ever notice that the word friendship says endship.... maybe its for a reason...
good poem though.. a touching tale :)

Love this poem reminds me so much of ma setuation
its touching story line easily related to

This poem touched me. I bet lots of girlz can relate. One of them is me! Please check out some of my poems!

Well it was a wonderful poem. Straight to the point. It flowed nicely too, well done.

Remember when we used to
Sit and watch the stars go by
^^I really adore this two lines

(I) felt so good and touched your thigh
I think you mean 'it'

Sorry if I'm wrong.

Keep up the good work!

Such a touching piece that was really sweet and I found the emotion to be heartbraking. To me this was also like a little story which is enjoyable in its own way. A good effot was put into this. ~mel

Hey nice work it was but i think honestly work on the ending abit but apart from that it was perfect :)

Very sweet i loved it excelent writing it was very cute 5/5 for good flow and well written piece

It was a good poem.
Very sweet.
I give it a..
hmm..
5/5 sounds about right?
=]