Deep inside

by LiNa   Jul 8, 2007


This was my first poem i ever wrote it is dedicated to my Best friend Sam , it is about both of us and what we went through and how we have both felt in the past . knowing that sometimes people just don't understand and judge you when they dont even know u and being so lost that u cant find ur self and u need a helping hsand and in this one i was her helping hand and she was mine and i never regret any minute of it.

Look at her clothes
look at her eyes
something is wrong deep inside
she tries to hide it
so no one will see
only the problem is me
she won't tell you but she won't deny it
she's just so lost deep inside
she wants someone who can help
her through this hard time
she tries to move on
she tries so hard to hide it
no one can see
that she's falling apart over me
it's a shame they say for her to be so lost
but is she really that depressed now
who did this
who broke the chains
she nails her heart to a board
so she can hide it all inside her soul
shes only a girl about 16
she so lost it's hard to find her
and understand her heart
and what she feeling inside
so much hatred
so much blood
so much evil within her soul
try to make it better for her.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    "she nails her heart to a board"

    I LOVE THAT!...it stands out like a sore thumb..a very well written piece right here, keep up the great work