Unwanted talents (pride)

by Spirit   Jul 8, 2007


For full effect pause after comma

What I do, is by some,
considered over rated,
my passions are odd,
and my talents, never stated,

My gifts are, unwanted,
and I always hated the fact,
that they all think it's easy,
to pull off this kind of act,

I tell them get over yourselves,
or, I'd like to see you try,
when in my head I'm screaming,
what you says a lie,

Many can not do,
what I do each day,
yet they laugh and sneer,
only mean things do they say,

I'm proud of how I preform,
proud of everything I can do,
and I'm proud to be on a team,
full of faces that are new,

I love to push myself,
so that I'm sure I will work hard,
and also I love the fact,
that I'm on the color guard,

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  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Well I love the flow of this, the rhyming is amazing.
    Although you spelled a word wrong.

    Preform. its actuall Perform.

    But other than that. fantastic.

    Ive never been compared to another poet, so thank you for the comparison. And thank you for the comments!

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I thought that was a very good poem.
    the way you explained that you had
    different talents from every one else.
    it was great,

    what you says a lie,
    i think should be
    what you say is a lie,

    i dunno, but it sounds better in my head that way.

    other than that nicely written

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    In this day and age the only thing you have to prove anything to is yourself, nobody else matters. Try capalizing your I's whenever you say I or I'm it will give your poem much better appearance. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

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