Not A True Friend

by Kristina   Jul 10, 2007


I thought you were my friend,
My best friend in fact.
I asked you to do one thing for me
And you wont even do it.

I do everything for you,
I have always been here for you,
But then you treat me like crap.

I don't understand it,
If you were a true friend
You would do what I ask,
It's just one simple favor.

Instead you get mad at me,
And don't want to talk anymore,
Then fine, I guess our friendship is over.

Copyright © June 08, 2007 - Kristina M

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  • 18 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    I have felt like this b4 i can so relate to this stanza
    I do everything for you,
    I have always been here for you,
    But then you treat me like crap.

  • 18 years ago

    by Angela

    Awww :(

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    This sounds like a poem written
    in the spur of the moment
    after a fight

    and thats when there is so much emotion
    in the poem
    and it makes it great

    nice job

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow, you can tell that this had a lot of emotions put into it, you wrote it straight from the heart, you got straight to the point, i liked that. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is a good poem in totality. The message is clear in this piece. Add more rhymes and it will be flawless. Tc

    Fsams

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