Entwined In This Dance.

by ABake   Jul 11, 2007


Our bodies move to the rhythm, your hands on my hips.
We begin to move slower, we just follow the beat.
Everyone is watching, you begin to bite your lip.
I'm beginning to get hot, can't handle the heat.

Our bodies moving together, you caress my stomach.
The beat becomes faster, but still we dance slow.
You whisper words in my ear, and I begin to blush.
It's so dark in here, no one will ever know.

My heart starts to pound, as you pull me close.
We move with each other, feels like we are one.
Songs end, and new ones begin.
We continue to dance, no where near done.

You move my hair, and softly kiss my neck.
Your hands touch my thighs, chills shoot up my spine.
So deep in the feeling, lost in steamy thoughts.
Thinking of what I want to do, so happy you are mine.

Another slow song, and we grind to the beat.
I turn my head, and your lips meet mine.
It becomes really hot, still I forget about the heat.
Thought the corner of my eye, I see you lick your lips.

I continue to move, and you do the same.
Once again the song changes, as does our speed.
My feelings are becoming really hard to keep tame.
Your body close to me, is what I need.

Thanks to Sam for the title =]
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=289683

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    I definitely could see EVERYTHING you described. The image was very clear. I got a very intense feeling from this one. It literally blew me away.
    You're amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    That was a great poem...i loved the way you paint the picture out for me...your a great writter...keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    Let me just start by saying that the title captivated me. Wow!
    but the whole poem was amazing. the imagery is strong..the emotions deep..and the words carefully chosen to represent the passion between the two dancers.
    i am taken away by this.
    great work! =]
    keep it up!
    --Viola

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet_rebellion

    Wow! Chills. I have CHILLS! I have never expierienced a dance with anyone but if I did, this is exactly how I would want it. WONDERFUL!! Makes me want to cry!

    sweet_rebellion

  • 16 years ago

    by Sydney

    Whoot. Anyone else hot?? lol jk. Ha that was good though. Descriptions were awesome and the ending penned it together nicely. Great job : )