Abandoned baby

by Infected with His Deadly Love   Jul 11, 2007


Baby cries in the lonely box
He doesn't understand why
No one is feeding him
can't they hear me cry?'

Scared and lonely
He cries himself to sleep
With an empty stomach
In his dream, he will weep

Days go by, he is dying here
He waits there day and night
For someone to save him
He is losing this fight

He takes his last breath
Only in this world for a week
His parents abandoned him
They were just too weak

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  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    In the first stanza, last line, I think you should have used quotation marks. A bit of your rhyming sounded a bit forced. I found the flow too be off in some spots too, try counting syllables to fix this perhaps? Good poem though. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Hope

    This poem is so touching, its profound and you know what thats just good writing, I love it Keep up the good work