Jesus To A Child

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Jul 12, 2007


Yes, I'm aware it came out as like a country song. But, I wrote it specially for a contest, this being the first kind of "country" twang to any of my poems.
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When you here the angels singing there's no second guessing it,
You just listen with your heart and open those tiny eyes,
Because there's a memory passing and God doesn't let me forget
With you by her side, my baby's sailing in the great blue sky.

Jesus, please tell her that she'll be okay and you'll take care of her;
And remind me one more time, why you had to take my baby girl away.
On these cold winter nights, I remember the hard times,
But I still look up to the Heaven's and sometimes I believe I hear my baby pray,

"Send Mr. Bear my best wishes, with a smile on your face,
Tell him I miss you both; but I can see you every night from this view;
It's beautiful up here, Daddy; I get to play with the angels;
But remember, you'll always be in my heart and I'll always need you.

Daddy, you don't need to worry on this cold winter night,
God's got me by his side, and there's no need to fret, Mommy's up here too;
We're watching over you; don't be frightened, it'll be okay,
And Daddy know, I'll always remember you."

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Daddy, you don't need to worry on this cold winter night,
    God's got me by his side, and there's no need to fret, Mommy's up here too;
    We're watching over you; don't be frightened, it'll be okay,
    And Daddy know, I'll always remember you."

    This stock of stanzas really captivated my attention. The mono rhymes are really having a positive impression. I like the wordings and the flow. Well penned and well written. TC

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Crazygonuts.

    here <<hear

    and awwwww. that got me. that was a change from the other poems of yours i read. great job. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "I'll alway remember you" << Always.

    It made me cry. Well, almost at least. I had tears about to come out. It's so sad. Amazingly written. I absolutely love it.
    My favorite so far. :]

    I'll give it a 5/5
    CrazyGoNuts.