I AM

by NIDAL   Jul 13, 2007


I am the carpenter of my own thoughts,
And a doctor to my own heart.

I am the priest of my own soul,
And a healer when life takes a toll.

I am the captain of my own sail,
And a general watching my own trail.

I am the mother delivering my own pains,
And a father earning my own disdain.

I am the painter of my own destiny,
And a writer to this book of blasphemy.

I am the shepherd of my own fate,
And a lonely wolf passing life's final gate.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Noelle Wright

    Great poem this is a great why to feel about yourself....i liked it alot

    ^^

    Noelle

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "I am the shepherd of my own fate,
    And a lonely wolf passing life's final gate."

    A beauty of a poem. It's short with simple words yet you've captured such a deeper meaning..
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    One more beautiful poem,... simple and well penned,...great work ...5/5:) i love your poems ! Your friend *Melody*

  • 16 years ago

    by tamara

    I think this is a great piece of writing, your choice of words is fantastic and its just a fantastic piece of poetry

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    A beautiful poem.
    It is so true.
    Nice rhyming, good words.
    Great piece of writing.
    Well done
    Take care

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