Her Identity

by Mommy And Me   Jul 16, 2007


Her Identity

And within her thoughts she holds him tight;
Never dreaming about letting him go,
Drowning in her very own tears.
She counts the days, the nights, and the stars;
Hanging on a single fading moment ...
Etched in her mind, along with her pain.
Drowning in her very own tears...
Invisible to the world, she counts the starts;
Everything in a world of non-sense, she smiles.
Slipping away into her peaceful bliss, she counts the stars..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought that this wasnt as good as your others. It didnt sound quite like a poem, and that you just threw together a few lines to make a poem

    but the general idea was very good
    another, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Etched in her mind, along with the pain
    she drowns in her tears
    everything in a world of non-sense,she smiles
    sliping away into her peacfull bliss, she counts the stars!

    wow i luved it as much as i luv u!hehe

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