This rope

by JaMeS   Jul 16, 2007


Us,
two independent people,
two separate lives,
bound by two sets of emotions,
two equal shares of love

love, acting like a rope,
it ties us together,
as time passes,
we are becoming just about you,
its never me, now,
not once, am i selfish?

strands of this rope under strain,
a few snap,
we're literally growing apart now,
should, can i carry on?

snap,
another strand goes,
joining other frayed feelings,
it cant hold up,
cant hold us together,

snap,
down to the last now,
a last Saviour,
last line of hope
before we split into a memory,
two separate lives,
again independent people,

snap

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Love this poem.
    How you discribe love as a rope.
    Emotional piece of writing.
    Beautiful
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Mandy Grace

    I loved it a lot. it was really good.

    mandy xx

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    I like this poem alot.I like how you used rope as a metaphor to explain how easy love can be broken.But hey you always gotta fight for love. ^_^ 5/5

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like this one from the beginning to the end. You're very talented. Every stanza holds so much emotions and very powerful imagery.
    Well done, 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    "another strand goes,
    joining other frayed feelings,"
    Hey, I especially liked this line.
    Is this poem about a current relationship or past one?
    Greta xx

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