Unsaid

by JaMeS   Jul 16, 2007


Some things are better left
unsaid
some truths better kept
secret
some feelings better locked
inside
some memories better left
buried
some moments better left
covered
some instincts better not
acted on
sometimes its better keeping quiet
leaving things unsaid

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    A short, yet true poem.
    Like the structure.
    Well done
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Marjan

    I couldn't agree more with the first line.

    But "some feelings better locked inside"...
    Wouldn't it be better to diminish them instead of locking them inside? Locking them inside may just make things worse. then again maybe not! I guess it all depends on the situation.

    These words made me think about things. Thank You! :)

    Marjan

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is short and sweet. totally unique and the structure is just great. Keep it up 5/5 all the way

    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    A very true worded poem ,beautifully done.

  • 16 years ago

    by ASHLEYDANIELLE NLUV

    I loved this and i felt it when i read it loved it ashley

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