This poem is very sad, but I love the way you wrote it... well done this poem is beautifully written... you seriously are very talented!! :-) 5/5 of course!

Wow! that was amaing you painted such a clear ictur, and told such a sad story, but pnned it beautifully, your rrhyming was perfect, and the flow was concequently flawless. You are vry talented. I really enjoyed reading this poem,a nd it really makes you think about all the times you have prehaps turned a blind eye on what should have been concidered! its almost as if th hidden message is 'stop being to self centered and tak a closer look' Your poem really touched me!
5/5
xXx

MMM. I liked this one a lot. This was a nice change in love poetry.

While waiting she reflects on her despicable past,
Truly scarred by the unforgiving loneliness of night,
Still incapable to fathom how quick forever passed,
Fights back the tears, holds a smile with all her might

That is my favorite stanza.
This whole poem has me wondering about her life.

5/5.

This one is beautiful you perfectly describe your emotions and imagination in each lines and mostly thr rhyming were great.Love it..Great job.Keep up the good thw work!

This is beautiful...beautiful and so very sad at the sime, so elegantly written and with such emotion and depth.
I love this, as I love all your work.

This poem is so so so sad.... =[

but so beautifully written...i really liked it...

good poem and a really great ending. 5/5

Thats was excellent told a very good story but being sad and very very descrictive and thought provoking at the same time :)

Wow great creativity and thought put in this poem very sad but strange i have never rea something quite like this great job!
5/5
laura

This is a really great poem. This was very creative and i really enjoyed it. This poem really makes you think about all the ppl that are really like that in the world. It is really sad that millions of people wait for someone just to notice them. Keep up the good work and ur poetry of honesty.
xoxoxo
jess

Amazing.
The imagery was stunning.
Your very talented.
Isn't Madame Boudreau from the titanic? Jack had a drawing of her and told rose the story.
I could be mistaken, still a wonderful peice.

Keep it up,
Elaine.

Wow, have I not already commented this poem? I know I have read it before. Great writing, Little Carlito! The imagery is awesome, but no joke, I love the originality and vibrance.
One thing: nickel's and dime's
^ You don't need the apostrophes, unless the nickels and dimes own something...hahaha.

K, peace out playa! 5/5

Sir this was another great poem by you... you have showed and proved your talent once again, the really like the imagery that made the poem more greater...... keep it up as always, and a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it

I like this poem keep up da good work!!

Wow, great poem! I love story you tell here and I enjoyed reading it. The detail you put into it was amazing, I could almost see her. The rhyme and flow were great as well. 5/5

marcella

Good poem

Excellent, the consecutive rhymes are very beautiful and catching. You have nicely describe the life and story of Madame Boudreau. I really loved this piece 5/5

Tc
Fsams

This is one good poem:D
just luvd it!!
u sure do have a way with words:D
hehe gr8 write
keep it up
tkcare
bree

plz rate and comment some of my poems:D
tk care

A beautifully written love poem, enjoyed the story a lot and the story behind the story as well. I find your ability of putting pen to paper quite captivating, and worth further notice as well. Such a gift is, in fact, a kind of a genius.

"What was once a beautiful rose, is merely thorn,
As time fades away, so to, does glory and gleam."

^ Aging physically and nonphysically is a nightmare. That's how cruel Time is. But then, again... didn't Time give us enough time? Hm. I like the seeming truth drawn out by the foregoing couplet, it's simply provocative. A joy to read, as always. all the best and take care. ~Marian

This is a wonderful poem, really deep, the emotions come across really well.
i love the line "Still incapable to fathom how quick forever passed"

thanks for the comment btw
xxx