Jupiter And Venus.

by Teria   Jul 17, 2007


Jupiter And Venus.

Perhaps it's philosophy's curse running through my veins,
taking away the passion I once held, and replacing my brains
with absolute contradictions, breeding a new life for myself..
one that I can't withhold from this world, nor you.

You see the looks within these uncolored eyes,
breaking the silence of my demons cries,
forgetting the promises, oh the secrets...
the ones you kept, the ones you broke; lies all lies.

I can't seem to find the person I once loved,
nor the one I still constantly think of,
It's like Jupiter and Venus becoming one;
impossible, impossible- - let's give up.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I'm sure so many people can relate to a poem of this standards. Every word breathe taking capturing my soul, heart and mind. Not one error throughout it. Loved the long lines really greatly structured. The flow didn't flaw what so ever it had a perfect rythem. Word usage powerful. You went into great depth on this poem. Loved it~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is beautifully written...the emotion and depth in this piece are overwhelming.
    I loved the wording you used, and the ending stanza is intense and hardhitting, a stunning ending to such a beautifully heartfelt piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Ohemgee; words can not explain how much I loved this poem. It truly took my breath away. This is exactly the kind of poem that I needed to read right now, I related to it very well and I like that. :) The word choice was awesome and the flow was good as well, I loved this, absolutely loved it.

    <3
    Jennuhh.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    Well written...i like the way each stanza collects a single thought.

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