I am sure the prince will not walk alone for long....this was a very well written poem ,well done.

O, WOW, i thought this was very amazing, i mean the first stanza was a little weak, but the last 3 were magnificent

the rhyming was good

and the flow was right on

"you cheat, deceive and hurt
and fraud me all along,
before i was too entranced by love,
to hear your seductive song,"

favorite stanza ^^

but i thought the ending was perfect, 5/5

This is a fantastic poem, the flow was great and the word choice and imagery as well. It's funny how easily we can be fooled by a few words from the opposite sex. Great job 5/5 GG23

Oh my goodness ..oh my goodness... oh my freaking goodness...lol...i love it...

espcially the last line...

the flow was great...well written... good poem! 5/5

Excellent flow and great words used. I really liked this mournful piece and it really touched my heart. Very nicely penned and having poetic qualities. 5/5 all the way

tc
Fsams

Excellent flow and great words used. I really liked this mournful piece and it really touched my heart. Very nicely penned and having poetic qualities. 5/5 all the way

tc
Fsams

Awww this is sucha sweet and devoted poem.. its sad too though, as he is ending up alone, and i can really realate! i loved the way you wrote it ; using 'prince' and 'princess' your flow was great, and so too was your rhyming.. the onlt thing i would say .. in your third stana you wrote 'for finally can i open my eyes' I think it would read better if it were to say 'for finally i can open my eyes, other than that it was brillaint!! 5/5!
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Hmm. the message you portayed in this opem was wonderful, but the wording and flow could be tweaked. if you want me to help you tweak, let me know. =]

WOWie a very good piece. It's so deep and so relating to people. 5/5

First of the flow of this poem is just outstanding The emotion is delivered with great skill, The romantic metaphors seemed to sooth the dark tone of the lost love Imust give it a 5>>>>

Wow dear kind prince..u sure know how to make a gr8 poem...woot woot:D
lovely!
5/5 for meee
keep it up darl
bree

This is so sad. i love it's flow. the ending was fantastic even though it was sad. it has just the right amount of stanzas too. keep up the great work. well done xoxo

This is a beautiful but sad poem and im sure a lot of ppl went through this situation just as you have and i think its sad! But this was very well written and i love the way you flowed with it...

now i push you away,
for finally can i open my eyes,
i see the witch in front of me,
that was my lover in disguise
^^^^^My Fav lines....

Beginning the flow is a little rocky, but i liked the content. towards the end, it gets much better. word choice was pretty good too. all over, i'd say 4/5. work on that flow, i usually try to say it out loud to make sure everything works. good luck, and keep up the good writing (:

I didnt care really for what type of poem it was, but overall it was a nice poem. nice flow and emotions were there..i rated this a 5

The 1st stanza didn't mean much but the last 3 did. It told much more than the first although, the first is also good but needs more info and yeah. Did I make sense? ^^;; I guess not, sorry.

Anyways, such a well sone poem! T~T poor prince, I hope he finds love again because no one in the world is meant to be alone.

I loved this poem....It was so beatifully written...

before i was too entranced by love,
to hear your seductive song

^ I absolutely loved those lines..Overall Great Job....5/5

Greatly written poem, I like it's flow and the way you expressed emotions. I can relate to your words.
The thirds stanza is my favorite.
5/5 from me.

This is so true 5/5

Beautiful piece

keep it up
xox