Why

by Michelle18   Jul 22, 2007


You never really loved me,
you never really cared.
to you our love was nothing but a game,
you made me feel so lame.
you only wanted to break my heart,
and tear my world into.
you only wanted to tear my world apart,
and make me feel so blue.
you said you loved me,
but the truth was really hid.
why did you do this to me,
what was it that i did?
i never gave you a reason,
a reason to treat me like dirt.
you dont know the pain i have,
and how much you made me hurt.
one word runs through my mind,
as i lay here and sigh.
i sit and ask myself,
why did you do this to me?
why?

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i cant take all the credit for this one...this poem was actually written by me and my best friend curry.. the reason the rhyming is off at the beginning is because we wrote different parts and just combined them.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Really effective ending here, another poem that I can really relate to. I also like the repetition of the words "a reason." Great write, Em xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    Well other then the first part it is a really great poem and i feel like i could relate to this wit my ex...your talented and so is your friend!

  • 16 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow this isnt as good as i know we both can write but its still good for being a combined poem i guess. this was for bobby,wasnt it? grr =[ lol i rated it a 4

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    You make a good team well done xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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