How Do I Say

by Raven   Jul 23, 2007


How do I tell you that your the only one that can make me Happy?

when your S/n pops up on messenger my heart skips a beat?

how do I tell you that your the only one that makes me smile?

How do I tell you that I think about you every minute of my life?

How do I tell you that your voice makes me feel warm inside?

How do I tell you that your touch makes me feel safe?

How do I tell you that I need you and want you in my life?

How do I tell you you are my world?

Do I keep it to myself or tell you and hope you feel the same way to?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    I love this. I like how this poem is made up of questions that make the reader think. Also, can relate to. =) Keep up the good work.
    ~ Lainey

  • 16 years ago

    by amber

    Good job. this is just how i feel and what i ask myself. but i cant say anything about how i feel. keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    5/5 a lot of people can relate to this and that'll make a lot people like it. Keep up the awesome writing =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Atrum Dominatio Donum ut is Letalis of Regnum

    Very good portrayal of emotions and feelings, and an unuaual but effective stucture. Nice work :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    I love the simplicity, it adds to the poem.
    And as for all the question's. You already did, Just give them the poem;)
    It was a good write, and a better read.
    Well done,
    Elaine. 5/5

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