I miss You

by Raven   Jul 24, 2007


You were there for me through thick and thin
Through the good times and the bad
I promised you i wouldn't cry
You held on till the very end

Your laugh and your smile is what i miss most
You never gave up you never quit
Mom we were so close
How do i just let you go

Sitting here in this empty home
No more happiness no more joy
I just don't want to be left alone.
As i sit here and reminisce in this empty home

I will love you forever
And forever more
Wait for me until god knocks on my door
Then we shall be together.

Together for Ever.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Nice piece, I really like the forever for ever part, excellently done, great job man, keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Aww this i a very beautiful yet sad peice, however its penned perfectly. A truely heartfelt and touching peice. I'm so sorry for your loss, But dont let it get you down, i'm sure your mum would be roud of you: your writting is incredible, both peices that i have read have truely touched me. Keep your head high! *hugs*
    another 5/5
    xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Aww this is sad...sorry for your loss..the poem is beautifull written.i really like it... keep your head up though...*gives you a hug* best wishes to you.

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Aw this is so sad.. i have not lost my mom.. but i mise well have cause shes never here for me... this is a very touching poem. i liked it a lot..keep up the great work. i rate this a 5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Beautiful! Just beautiful! 5/5

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