I Love You

by Raven   Jul 31, 2007


Baby your the one for me
It took me a while but now i see
That you and me where ment to be
I hope were together for eternity

I know that my love for you is real
I wish i could tell you how i feel
You are my life my soul my heart
Our love is real
So nothing can tear us apart

I thought i would never know how love would be
I'm glad you share your love with me
On day me and you will finally be together
I hope our love will last forever
I thank go everyday
Because he sent someone like you my way

My feelings for you are really true
Thats why i say "I LOVE YOU"

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  • 16 years ago

    by judith redmount

    You use nice rhyme. I like the way you put true emotions into the poem. makes it even more real. keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Aww this is just too sweet :)
    Rhyming was excellent, it flowed very nicely.
    I really liked it, keep it up!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is a great poem..it flowed nicely and the rhyming was also good.....

    there are a few mistakes though..in the first stanza "ment" needs to be changed to meant.

    and in the last stanza..."go" needs to be changed to god...

    but other than that,the poem is great..nice job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by kitkat girl

    Nice job!! Good poem, and you did a really nice job with rhyming.
    A few things, on the third line you put where, when i think you meant were.
    Also at, "On day me and you" I think you mean one and not on.
    Very good, poem, very sweet.
    peace,
    soffe

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Yeah, some of the spelling isnt great.
    But it flowed well, it was a sweet poem, it held emotion and was simple yet capturing.
    love Tara-Kay
    x

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