Sparkles of The Night.

by Teria   Jul 23, 2007


Sparkles Of The Night.

As his voice echos on the phone,
and night butterflies fly across the ground,
I lay upon the cemented side walk,
with chalk writing all about.
And, listen to the beauty
connecting through just wired lines.
I stare upon the darkest night,
and count the starts that shine so bright.
Drifting up ahead lies the brightest,
surrounded by a million sparkles of the night,
just as my love surrounded
by his own beauty.

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  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    I thought this was actually really beautiful teria, it was simple and yet it was really detailed and thoughtful and that's what really appealed to me in the poem, so amazing and gorgeous and really sorta gives off a feeling of hope and strength somehow.
    5/5
    gabriella

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    To me this was gorgeous. The imagery was absolutely beautiful expecially the butterflys and chalk drawings. Again throughout this piece I loved the the flow and the structure was unique and different but I truely liked it alot. Again an awsome job. ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    In this piece I like the flow but I think the structure needs a little work. Word choice is good and the meaning is clear.

    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    I can picture it all.It was short,simple,&sweet.4/5

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very unique and interesting. It is short but still very powerful. Atmosphere that you created is superb and whole piece is written excellently. It isn't classic love poem which is great. Wording is also good and it is very easy to read. Every line is well written and emotions are beautifully expressed. This poem really deserves 5/5

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