The Perfect Blemish

by Midnight Sun   Jul 24, 2007


"If you had the power
To change one thing about me
What would you choose?"
I asked nervously.

He replied, "Nothing."
And I suspiciously asked why.
Then he turned to me
And blissfully sighed.

"Because then you wouldn't be perfect.
And I love you because you're you,
Not because you have potential
Or because I can change your views!"

I smiled and blushed
And turned away sheepishly
I looked back to find him
Staring admiringly at me

It was a blessing to find him
Someone willing to accept imperfection
One who doesn't love me to change me
But someone who loves me with truest affection

*I know the flow is off in a few places but it's actually based on something that a guy really said to me once. It was a very special moment...I hope you enjoy it too! :)
~Midnight Sun

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Great poem keep up the good work and take care.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    "Because then you wouldn't be perfect."

    WOW.... that's literally what I said to myself after reading that line. To have a guy say that to you must make you feel like the most amazing thing in the world. Great job, honestly.... keep it up and I'll keep checking out your work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    I can relate to this so much Midnight and it made me want to cry
    The pure love in these words is a sight you don't see often

    "It was a blessing to find him
    Someone willing to accept imperfection
    One who doesn't love me to change me
    But someone who loves me with truest affection"

    The flow may be off (as you said) but when it comes from the heart, it's hardly noticeable
    Brava
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by PoEtiCmYme

    Love this poem coz it tells a clear story that holds so many secrets beyond the word

  • 16 years ago

    by njabulo b

    That was good.

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