Broken Stars

by Michelle18   Jul 25, 2007


You use to be my guiding star,
You'd always show me the way.
I'd follow you anywhere,
Through the night and even the day.
I knew you'd never let me down,
So I let you take the lead.
You'd always make me proud,
You were a rolemodel to me.
But then one cold day,
You decided to leave me.
I didnt know where to go,
I never thought you'd decieve me.
As I look up into the sky,
It doesnt look the same.
It looks so different,
It looks so strange.
What use to be my guiding star,
Is no longer there.
Now all I see are broken stars,
In the sky and everywhere.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Curry

    Awhh this reminds me of bobby..grr bobby. but i like it of course. i dont think theres one poem that i dont like of yours. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    It was sad and i like how your imaginary work though it will look more beautiful if you try to put some rhymes in it...Keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem is sweet and at the same time hurtfull. i enjoyed reading this poem very much. great job. 5/5

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