My Photoshop Tastes Like Beverage.

by Teria   Jul 29, 2007


My Photoshop Tastes Like Beverage.

The sadness in your heart is carved from my own pain,
and the pieces falling apart are pushing you insane.
The perfection in each flaw corrects the worlds mistakes,
and the truth told by my best friend seems to be so fake.

And, the little things that taunt me ruin my whole day,
as the larger things that follow me corrupt my yesterday.
The memories that I hold are lingering within my mind,
as forever and a day are becoming harder to find.

The singles in the church club tend to come around,
take my heart and break it, then leave me on the ground.
The best friends that I hold so close never seem to lie,
which makes me seem so wrong in everybody's eye.

The problems that I have they build and build and build..
As the problems that I had are the reason my bodies filled.
And, it's like this life of mine is confusing all the time, leaving me no leverage..
Reminding me that my photoshop tastes like beverage.

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Title given by Jennifer. xD

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I liked this one, and the title was brilliant, though my friend, you did manage to create something out of it that i wouldnt have expected from anyone else.
    Brilliant!!
    Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    The poem was very good, though I did get confused at the end. hahaha still a well written poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    "The perfection in each flaw corrects the worlds mistakes,"
    ^ It's strange to note each flawless flaw corrects the flaws of this world. Ironic it is.

    "And, the little things that taunt me ruin my whole day,
    as the larger things that follow me corrupt my yesterday."
    ^ Ah! That couplet is smashing, sweets. It encompasses so much power and meaning and emotion. Absobloodylootely brilliant. I'll give you props for that. ;]

    I liked this one better, m'dear. Sweltering emotions were blaring throughout the page. It's very poignant; and I liked it. When you stated, "Reminding me that my photoshop tastes like beverage.", it gave me an impression of bittersweet aftertaste. Figuratively. The subject you had portrayed in this work seemed miserable with her unhappy life, whereas your portrayal of herself was quite excellent. I enjoyed it, nevertheless. Thanks for sharing! ~Marian

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    WoW well i have to give it to you-this poem was amazing! I love the way you used you words{again} and i loved the way you ryhmed! You are amazing! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    And, the little things that taunt me ruin my whole day,
    as the larger things that follow me corrupt my yesterday.

    Firstly, the title really caught my eye, so I must congratulate you on coming up with such a unique yet captivating title. Now i'll start on the poem lol. It was brilliant. The rhyme and flow was quite good which kept me hooked from beginning to end. Loved every line of it, loathe you for writing such a fantastic poem:)

    You are a talented poet!
    Take Care.

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