You Made Me Fall

by Cathy   Jul 30, 2007


I took your pictures off the wall
I ignored my phone when you called
I just want to be alone for now
to give me time to think of what I want somehow

I know it bothers you but thats OK
theres no one else to blame for why things are this way
I told you before it was me or your fun
you couldn't even choose so now were done

I think its quite sad that I gave you my all
and when I tripped hard you just let me fall
you didn't reach out to lend me a hand
you didn't show love you didn't understand

I wanted nothing more than for us to make it
but things got too rough I just had to quit
So I took the pictures off the wall
and picked myself up when you made me fall

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well it was a great poem.. Very emotional. It flowed nicely, good job! I think to improve this you should try to use punctuations =)

    Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    That is a sad story...but one heck of an ending! Its always great to get up after hard trials.....Tough going through things and having people you thought you loved watch you go threw them with no help.....but your a good person to be telling your story of how you really CAN get yourself through negative situations!.....Great poem Cathy! Good meaning!
    Chelsey

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    So much meaning and feeling in this one. Well done

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