The Pain

by lish   Aug 3, 2007


You don't know the pain its caused me
the fatal tears I've shed
while i sit here thinking
about all the things you said

how dare you treat me like this
I'm now yours to own
why cant you just help me
I'm just so alone

you treat me like dirt
like I'm a piece of sh*t
but what you don't know
is that I'm just so sick of it

you say that you care
but we both know its a lie
the way that you treat me
makes me want to die

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This one is so touching and filled with emotions in every stanza. It is short but well written with really good flow.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Aww this is sad....really sad... but you did a great job expressing yourself through this poem...the flow and rhyming were perfect.

    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Oh how sad!! but u've done a great job! i was carried away by the emotion nice one

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    The word choice is simple yet effective, the flow is flawless, the emtion is again strong, the message crystal clear, perfectly penned once again 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by sheila

    Awww how sad but great poem hope its not true=]

    * $heila *

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