Beyond Regret

by Lonely Little Dreamer   Aug 4, 2007


Loose actions bring filth and decay,
Spoiling the skin as it peels away as rancid flakes.
No amount of holy water can wash away,
Or take away the nauseating taste.

Whoring out the body for carnal desires,
Leaves the child empty; as shallow as her thoughts.
She killed her friends with words of acid,
Nobody could love a girl with no remorse for actions.

As judgment day soon approaches,
She gathers into the crawling pile of flesh.
The bodies all around her scream out for forgiveness,
As the dark lord now approaches for one last test.

The time comes now for the girl to take the stand,
Pulling away from the grabbing arms of the damned,
As they ride south to hell's layers of agony and justice.
Looking to the lord, she drops to her knees with a plea.

Shaking words escape her lips but have no meaning in the end.
Do you regret? Stops her pleas echoing the fear of the dead.
The child remains silent, though one word could save her,
From the agonizing future that laid ahead.

Time passes, slowly creeping to the dreaded end,
As her head shakes beyond the will of its master.
The lord now has his answers as she is ripped away,
Taken by the chains that pull at her bloodied flesh.

There was only one answer that she could ever possibly give.
For a girl who caused such misery,
With no remorse on the earth's living soil.
Is beyond regret at hell's fiery door.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melvin LeVeque

    One word wowthatwasamasing

    5/5 very nice

  • 16 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    I LOVED IT.............

    not much else that i can say

    5/5

    your an amazing writer
    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, greatly written dark poem, with powerful message. You created amazing, dark atmosphere through the piece, which is very effective.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -Whoring out the body for carnal desires,
    Leaves the child empty; as shallow as her thoughts.
    She killed her friends with words of acid,
    Nobody could love a girl with no remorse for actions.-
    ^ Flawless, the wording in every line amazes me, the most effective stanza.

    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    This is a good poem it has meaning my only bug with it if im honest is that it didnt have more flow i think this was the best part of the poem and i wish its energy was throughout

    As judgment day soon approaches,
    She gathers into the crawling pile of flesh.
    The bodies all around her scream out for forgiveness,
    As the dark lord now approaches for one last test.

    The time comes now for the girl to take the stand,
    Pulling away from the grabbing arms of the damned,

    but overall a very good read :)

  • 16 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Oh wow...just...Wow. lol. I LOVED it. I love how you put the girl in as she was being sort of tortured in her own regret in front of a jury type of thing. Very nice imagination. =P

    I liked the flow, even though there were no rhymes. Free verse usually isn't my type of writing, but it's a good way to get things out. Very nicely done. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

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