I really like this one. I love how you start off when one thing and then basically do it's oposite. Like to rant and rave and never hear. I think that's cool. It's sort of ironic. I'm trying to decide wheather I'll give it a four or a five. I think I'll give it a four because some of the 'oposite parts' I just wish some of them were a little different.

'To lose the war and never bleed'

^ my favourite line.
This was an amazing write.
Your talent really shows through your work.
Your flow seem's so natural, and the word use just as so.
I wish I could write like you.
And there is no way I could give you any lower than a 5.
Amazing job,
Elaine.

I love how you put the concept of forever and never..together haha..very effective and its an amazing piece...keep up the great work ;)

Wow great poem. I really liked the way you have written it in a blank verse style. 5/5 I will give u :)

I like the title of ur poet thats why i dont hesitate to read it... the contents are very much good and u have a great imagery .. some lines has a deep meaning for me... thanks for sharing and keep it up!5/5

I loved it 5/5 the title was catchy then the poem was amazing the flow was great! nice job it was a very great poem i loved it!!!! nic emagination!!!

"To live forever
and never love,
To feel the wind
and never breathe"

this is a great piece i enjoyed reading you just put the words perfectly together
another5/5
laura

Wow. i loved this whole piece. i loved the concept of it, the words you use. it was a delight to read this. great work 5/5

This outstanding poem really grabbed me I tried to vote twice but the site would not let me I did add you and this poem to my favorites and will red more when I get time
thanks for sharing

That was Fantastic!! :) I enjoyed that poem greatly. After the first couple of lines, I was completely drawn into the words and feel of this poem. I will vote! 5/5

This is really good, it gave me goosebumps. It was so well thought of and the metaphors and similes were so awesome! you did great once again!!

Wow, this was amazing. Every image created was like a separate story, telling of different circumstances. The concept was very intriguing. Well done, a very enjoyable read.

The poem is deep and very beautiful, but I think that the lines in every stanza should be a little longer. I like its message and the subject, but this is not my favorite one of yours.
4/5 from me

Excellent poem. Very neat; the structure was amazing The flow was flawless. Great use of metaphors and imagery. 5/5 Great Job.

Keep it up && Take Care!

-Shannon <3

Beautifull. the use of words, the flow. great poem

xx trace

This poem is great i wouldnt be able to criticize it if i tried

Excellent!

Very descriptive and the flow is great!
simple words but deep in meaning!

keep it up!

Hey,
an excellent poem, I love the neat structure of the poem and the perfect flow.
I love your work so im going to put you in my favorite authors! XD
I especially like the first stanza,5/5
kisses stephanie

Such a sad poem..of the teasing of life. I liked it and it had good flow. Keep up the great writing. 5/5

5/5 wow message is very clear, nicely done