The real me

by MorbidCupcake   Aug 5, 2007


I never needed him
I never had to cry
He asked me out on a whim
He didnt really even try

I gave effort for nothing
I put my love on the line
Maybe if I stop running
I will be alright

Their words cant hurt me
Like sticks and stones
Im stronger than that
Words dont break bones

I hid away to please them
They wanted me down
But now Im ready to stand up
And give them a chance on the ground

Im more than I was
But now Im all I can be
Cuz Im finally standing
As the real me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Amy

    That's a nice poem but if you want some advice (don't take it the wrong way, that's an amazing poem) I would say to make it more interesting using better vocab and things coz I sort of found myself reading it but not paying full attention to what I was reading and ended up having to read it again.

    ~Amy

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    Amazing.. simply amazing.. a damn good flow and a damn good write.. "..words dont break bones"
    great work

    keep it up

    ~Wake~

  • 16 years ago

    by TrueLover

    I like this poem...it really is inspirational

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