Roses Reborn

by Riley   Aug 6, 2007


When these petals shrivel neatly,
And fall hard to the ground.
They'll hit the dirt below our feet,
And resign without a sound.

The stem is left untouched,
For the thorns are ever threatening.
With time it wilts and yellows,
Showing a death no less than settling.

When the once beautiful rose,
Decays and wastes away.
It leaves behind a fragment,
Of itself from its bright days.

Forgotten in the rich soil,
A new seed starts to sprout.
The tiny shell of the plant,
Sucks moisture and breaks out.

Soon there's a whole new bush,
Beauty of the deepest red.
Roses reborn from a worthless corpse.
And we forget about the dead.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    I must say at the beginning of this poem I completely thought " He can't outdo the first stanza, the ending is going to stink" But, I was wrong.x D

    It was a great poem, beginning to end. Just like all of yours are. So many people either have too strong of a beginning or ending, but you have the ability to even it out flawlessly.

    I'm sorry my comments aren't very useful, I kind of wish I could fin d something wrong, just so that they could be useful. Lol.
    But, your poems need no work, no help, no adjusting - they're perfect. xD

    keep it up.

    5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney

    I love this poem! One of the best. The words flowed together nicely and the imagery was truely amazing.
    Great job!
    5/5
    Keep up the good work
    *Brittney

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    There is so much creativity in this. It flows absolutely perfectly throughout and is wrotten so well. This was by far the best i've seen on here lately, wow.
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Wow i love this poem its very creative and the words spoke their own language i love it !!!5/5
    laura

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