Demonic Vision

by ben thompson   Aug 7, 2007


Satan's metropolis forged deep in hell's fires.
Dark evil chants, sinister melodious lyre.

Smoke filled caverns lie above charred grounds.
Demons amble fiendishly, making ghastly rounds.

Spirits split the night, shrieking in the dark.
Human innocence extinguished gone with a spark.

Volcanoes spew hot magma, in the air it blows.
Searing of flesh, into blistering lakes it flows.

Dark prince scowls on his throne of fresh souls.
Summoning his minions to collect demonic tolls.

Pray to our Lord these creatures never escape.
Torturous crimes they'll commit murder, theft and rape.

Walk in the light and keep a prayers hope.
Maintain faith our future doesn't go up in smoke.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I liked it. Very colourful vocabulary. And fabulous imagery also.

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Wow...luv it...really dark and deep...awesome poem...

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ben
    What a deep and powerful piece. The imagery and word choices are fantastic. The picture your words paint for the minds eye gives me chills. What a great message at the end.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

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