Breathe with me

by NyellMoonlight   Aug 9, 2007


Cast a shadow on me-
let me lick my wounds
while the tears as icicles
hang down my eyelashes.

Crash me, don't hesitate
this familiar feeling won't haunt me-
those are just loving memories of you
oh, I'll bury them, I'll burn them.

Cast a shadow on me-
please, let me fall.
We're divided with the
wall made of mirrors-
our reflections leave us blind.

Breathe, breathe with me
for the last time.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Isabella

    Absolutely outstanding. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This wasnt my favourite poem. i think it was really good, and it flowed well. It just wasnt what i expected.
    but a good job anyway
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Excellent poem....this piece flowed nicely and was very well written..it had alot of feeling in it..and the ending is my favorite part.5/5 from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Atrum Dominatio Donum ut is Letalis of Regnum

    Well written and good meaning to the poems, like the icecles hanging from the eyelashes a lot. Well done :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    I liked this poem it have a lot of emotion but again the flow was a little off the subject however was very intense to read about.

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