Just Another Girl

by Bre Monique   Aug 11, 2007


I remember when I first met you
I wanted you as soon as I saw you
You were funny and everyone loved you
And I wanted to somehow make you love me

I don't know how it happened but it worked
You came to me and I was yours
You made me melt inside just by looking at me
And I got butterflies just from hearing your name

When I was down you picked me up so easily
You promised me we would last
And I believed you because I saw that look in your eye
The look that made me just know everything would be ok

I wish I would've known before I got my hopes so high
That I was just another girl
Because now you're looking at her
With that same look that you once promised me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Libby

    This is amazing.
    well done..
    its really good,
    xx
    libby

  • 16 years ago

    by dAnCe4aDrEaM

    I reeeaaaally love this one! and alot of us can relate to it! great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    This was a sad poem in the end i did not expect it well done another 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Its good i like it :P
    thanx for the comment, its a good read ill look at some others.
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Another fine written piece by you, I think the flow was smooth, good job. I think to improve this.. you should put it into stanzas =)

    Nonetheless a good read.
    Thanks for the comment!