Time (Haiku)

by my name is Llama   Aug 11, 2007


My exultation
Of the innocence within
Yesterday's memory

A Haiku is three lines; the first line has 5 syllables, the second has 7 syllables and the third has 5 syllables.

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  • 16 years ago

    by hadia

    I love how you wrote this.
    not only that, but it has a really good meaning!

  • 16 years ago

    by hadia

    I love how you wrote this.
    not only that, but it has a really good meaning!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Despite the form being so short, you still managed to pack in so much emotion and depth in this piece, while filled with such melancholy, I found it to be beautifully written and a delightful read.

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    I really liked that. It was so short, but the words you chose made it seem longer. It had more meaning than any haiku I could ever write. Great job!

    ~Mo~

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. haiku's are one of my favorite poems i have ever encounted. i loved this, it was nicely thought of and you expressed it well

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