Consider

by my name is Llama   Oct 11, 2007


How rare
true love,
happiness,
life.

How valuable
to listen,
taking the time,
a smile.

How beautiful
a first kiss,
a sunset,
followed by a sunrise.

How sudden
a bolt of lightening,
things go wrong,
then right.

How delicate
a feather,
fine silk,
a mothers touch.

How cherished
a photo album,
a present,
the past.

How fast
the rumor,
all those years,
time.

How fleeting
the life of a bubble,
childhood,
a shooting star.

How assumed
safety,
opportunity,
hope,
the issue of
your next breath.

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  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    Wow that wuz great!!
    i loved it
    :]
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is beautiful..despite being relatively short you managed to pack in so much depth and emotion.

    The imagery you created was beautifully done, it painted very vivid pictures in my mind.

    I found this to be beautifully written with an insanely great message behind the written words.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    Naw I liked this poem very much ^.^ Some how it just warms me up...
    5/5 keep up the good work, kay? xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    It was wonderful. It summed up life in very few words, but each word had its own feeling. I think it was breath taking. It was seriously excellent. Great job, keep it up.

    ~Mo~

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem was good. i felt it was kinda forced though. i rated this a 5

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