Fluctuating (Triple Haiku)

by my name is Llama   Aug 11, 2007


Impulsive outburst
Uncontrollable frenzy
Creativity

Hope for the future
Happiness, love and friendship
Paradisaical

Dark hollow despair
Clouded with sadness and gloom
Inadequacy

A Haiku is three lines; the first line has 5 syllables, the second has 7 syllables and the third has 5 syllables. I have just done a set of three because it was needed for what I was trying to depict.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was beautifully done, I loved the flow in this, it was flawless throughout.
    The ending you chose was perfect, so intense and powerful that it hits the reader like a slap in the face.
    This is perfect.

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I have never seen 3 haiku's in the one, i thought it was great, nicely penned

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