Why can't everyday be this great?

by Beauty In The Breaking   Aug 11, 2007


*This one is a work in progress thats giving me a little hassle coming out all the way lols Give me some time and I'll finish it =D*

Adrenalin racing and my heart soaring,
feeling so carefree and weightless
and like everything is right in the world.
Why can't everyday be this great?

Racing wind blowing through my hair
and the sounds of people laughing,
old friends together and new one's made,
Why can't everyday be this great?

The bright summer sunshine pouring down from above
the warmth of it touching my face like a kiss
and turning my ear to listen to the voice of the wind,
Why can't everyday be this great?

White dappled clouds flout by without care
and I wonder what they see from way up there,
a feeling of peacefulness washes over me,
Why can't everyday be this great?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    It is very interesting. Maybe you could change a few things, you could write one more stanza. I like it, ending is very effective. Whole poem is written greatly!

  • 16 years ago

    by Willow

    I agree. if only everyday could be that great.... hmm keep dreaming... lol. great pome so far. 5/5.
    love willow oxox

  • 16 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Awesome start keep it up, i know it will me a masterpiece when it's finish. And thank you so much for the comment. Shanik