Lighthouse

by Rose not your average   Aug 12, 2007


In the night,
You see a light.

That goes round in circles
And gives the sea some sparkles.

It spins all around,
So people can come earthbound.

The boast look for a light,
In the skylight.

So they know were they can find shore,
So they are not unsure.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    This was very good,you give life to the light house and makes it look simple great job, your friend Tracy d......................5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't like the last stanza but rest of this poem is great. It is original and atmosphere is interesting. Short but still very powerful piece. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    Another cute poem =] I really like these stanza's :

    That goes round in circles
    And gives the see some sparkles.

    It spins all around,
    So people can come earthbound.

    You're talented =]
    5/5
    x

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