I wish

by Rose not your average   Aug 20, 2007


I wish I could write about something happy.
But everything comes to me so darkly.
My emotions are sad.
My life is screwed up.

I try to work my way through,
But I keep getting pulled back.
Back into that darkness,
Right back into the misery.

I wish I could smile,
But no matter how hard I try,
The tears fall instead.
I try to look ahead!

I try to look ahead to see something good,
But everything is just too hard,
Everything is just so bloody,
Everything is to painful.

I wish I could explain it!
But it just dose not’t come out right!
I want to be happy,
But how?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    Your poems are sad, but
    they seem so full of true
    emotions. Thanks for
    commenting my poem.
    The haiku poem is actually
    each stanza is a haiku and I
    put them together to create
    one whole poem. I noted it on
    the poem after you mentioned it
    to me. Thanks. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by HUGIYDAWY

    This is an emotional poem.

    "i try to work my way trhough but keep getting pulled back"

    my fav line. it really expresses the way you feel and how hard it is for you to cope. though you're at least trying, ur not likee this coz u want to be, its like a burden on top of you.

    i love it.
    great poem
    much love .xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Corruption

    Great poem
    you wrote this quite well
    tis confusing
    but it should be
    it is relating to how you feel
    which i find you explain is confused lol
    tis real good
    also thx for the comment

    Keenan

  • 18 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Wow so much emotion in this poem its amazing

    asheigh

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    Pretty good..it had good flow...a bit repetitive in places but i could feel the emotions and the struggle the person is having...good write..keep it up!

    Amie

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