Beginning - the story part 2

by JaMeS   Aug 12, 2007


I know i should say this
instead of writing like a fool
and just pick up the phone
and make my all important all

tell you we have to meet
with something i just need to say
look deep within your eyes
and silently hope away

pray to all up high
that these feelings lay with you too
remember you're the center of my world
and without you i have no clue

I'm lost and left wondering
in this cruel world all alone
but wait i feel a smile
for a mutual love you have shown

I'm so happy i took the chance
I'm glad i ignored my doubt
i left behind my sadness
my pain I'm now without

i cant believe you liked me
I'm shocked you met me there
your the answer to all my questions
the reply to all my prayers

for now i hope i have you
i hope your mine to keep
from my heart i wish you never change
for its your love i fell in deep

...the last part of the story coming soon

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  • 16 years ago

    by tears i cry

    A good flow some good rhyming but some of the lines didnt make sense 3/5

  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    I really loved this poem and ur part one, so deep and so honest...i hope this girl goes all well for you, i really do and let no heart break come,
    nice work,
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  • 16 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Its been a while since ive read love poems. and i think this one's really great. makes me want to read more love poems. good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    Good poem the emothion really shines through I can wait for part 3 again my only negitive comment I that you have used i alot and not made it a capital I and your sentances do not begin with capitals.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    What a sweet poem.
    Rhyme and word choice were great as in part one.
    Loved reading this besautiful piece.
    Look forward to read the last part.
    Take care