Predictable

by Michelle18   Aug 12, 2007


All guys are the same,
They tell so many lies.
Just to make us happy,
They'll say we're the stars in their skies.

But really what they're thinking,
Is that they dont necessarily care.
They'll say all the words,
They think we want to hear.

They only want one thing,
We all know this for a fact.
Teenage boys have to much on their minds,
To become so attached.

But thats just one theory,
The only theory of mine.
Boys will be predictable,
Until the end of time.

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  • 16 years ago

    by tears i cry

    It was good but the rhymes didnt rhyme exept in the first stanza 4/5 for good flow but lack of good rhymes

  • 16 years ago

    by Curry

    Ehh this isnt one of your best. but it is all very true! 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    THIS IS SO TRUE!!!!!!!!

    I totally agree with everything you have written in this poem. Yes, guys are always predictable, I have seen examples of this so many times.

    Anyway lol, the flow got shaky in the beginning because of the line "They'll say we're the stars in their skies." That line is too long. But it's okay because afterwards, the flow got back on track.

    I really enjoyed this poem. 5/5

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Mmmmm I disagree. Perhaps you have had more bad experiance with them than I have. Or I just pick good people to date I don't know. I havn't dated a lot though but I have had two that all they really cared about was sex. Niether of them lasted very long but it's ok cause I didn't know them very well anyways so we weren't heartbroken or anything to break up. The rhyming skips a bit and it probably doesn't help that I don't agree with it so sorry on that part. If you want I'll rate it but if I do it will be low.

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