Irreality (Triolet)

by my name is Llama   Aug 14, 2007


Waiting in anxious anticipation
Dizzy and spinning from reality
Unable to withhold temptation
Waiting in anxious anticipation
Wanting to achieve liberation
Unable to see and comprehend
Waiting in anxious anticipation
Dizzy and spinning from reality

A Triolet consists of 8 lines. The 1st, 4th, & 7th lines repeat. The 2nd and 8th lines repeat as well.
The rhyme scheme is: ABaAabAB. Capital letters representing repeated lines. The big A and little a, and big B and little b don't have to rhyme but I have for the A;a's because it fitted better.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    OH OH OH my favourite formed style!!

    I loved this, you truly did a wonderful job with this, triolet's aren't always so easy to write but you pulled this off wonderfully.

    This is perfect.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well done, what a lovely job you did, emotion is awesome and the way you wrote this was breathtaking.
    love always
    Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffani

    Very good write. the emotion in such a short poem is awesome 5/5