The Storm that Scarfed..

by Wake   Aug 17, 2007


When my world comes down,
the pain will slowly fade
or maybe it'll just become numb to the ache
that comes back everyday.

When no-one is around
i burn every memory i ever made
Scarring it again and again,
but it comes back everyday.

I open the windows just
and let the winds kiss in the rain
but squalls plunge in me
all of yesterday's pain.
..I try to live in feign
..of a love unrequited from the start
..but its like trying to calm a storm
..that scarfed around my heart.

I wished you could've been the one
to save me from myself
You said you'd never be gone
but you're just like everybody else.

When the night comes around,
i sometimes wish that i could change
tomorrow's another start
but would it be any different than today?

But if i tried to stand up again
I'd only be hurting my own soul
Because you'll always remain the same
and sometimes pieces are just as good as the whole.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaz

    WISH I CUD.. GIVE YA MORE THN 5..lol too good

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I can relate to this poem.
    It is so deep, filled with sadness, and excellently written. I like it from the beginning to the end, but my favorite part is:
    -When my world comes down,
    the pain will slowly fade
    or maybe it'll just become numb to the ache
    that comes back everyday.-

    I like the atmosphere that you created through the piece, it is very effective.

  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    ..I try to live in feign
    ..of a love unrequited from the start
    ..but its like trying to calm a storm
    ..that scarfed around my heart.

    man this is my favorite part! I can relate to this poem. It's so deep! You wouldn't believe how wondeful your poems are. You write what you feel and i can feel it too. It's not reading, it's feeling. Don't ever stop writing man. 5/5 all the way!
    **Heather**

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxy

    I am seriously speechless!!! Thank you for commenting my poem, You said that my poem was good but what about yours....My favorite piece was the following stanza :

    I open the windows just
    and let the winds kiss in the rain
    but squalls plunge in me
    all of yesterday's pain.
    ..I try to live in feign
    ..of a love unrequited from the start
    ..but its like trying to calm a storm
    ..that scarfed around my heart.

    I weish you luck within the future!! You should get your poems publish though I wouldnt be surprised if they already where =P
    xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    This was a beautiful poem!
    Sad and very emotional.

    " I wished you could've been the one
    to save me from myself
    You said you'd never be gone
    but you're just like everybody else. "

    My favourite stanza, so sad.
    Loved reading this piece.
    Take care

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