Poem for myself.

by Miu   Aug 20, 2007


Dragged down with you.
Mercy, misery, please stay.
Crowded place, with no people.
None that you could hear.
Scream, Scream all out.
They won't stop, will craw you away.
Place far from earth.
No questions asked.
I will never be there.
Never.
Don't cry for yourself,
Cry for me, Cry for the times you dared.
Lie, that's what you are.
A lie, you can't satisfy all,
Nor me, leave this place.
And let me breath again.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ali

    Wow, this is a beautiful piece, short but sweet!!!
    i really liked it and i could relate to it really well, the repetition really emphasises the emotions of this piece, this is one of the best things i have read for a while!!!!
    really really good stuff!!!
    5/5
    - ali xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    That was incredible. I could feel the sadness radiate from the screen. The words were simple yet beautiful. I really enjoyed it. My favorite part that stood out above all else Don't cry for yourself,
    Cry for me, Cry for the times you dared.
    Lie, that's what you are.
    That was my favorite part. Great Job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    It was a very good poem..
    short but sweet and to the point.
    Keep up writing..
    you expressed the way you feel well in this poem.
    again its veryy good.
    xoxo
    --Chelsey

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this is so powerful! Whole piece is absolutely effective, excellently written. I like it from the beginning to the end, it has very unique descriptions and imagery that is truly vivid. You created interesting atmosphere through it with great wording.
    Excellently expressed emotions, too.
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    I love this poem it was awesome keep up the good work doll.5/5

    Cory

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