Comments : Pain

  • 14 years ago

    by Manar

    This was very REAL....good work

  • 14 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Excellent work man keep it up.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Beautiful write!!!
    Greatly done.

    God bless u

  • 14 years ago

    by Shama

    Brilliant poem.... really.

  • 14 years ago

    by Wake

    Awww..damn amazing ..coolio flow..really liked it ..did sum really fine job on it.
    loved the friendship title tht spoke so clearly on the behalf of so many hearts.. great work


  • 14 years ago

    by Kristina

    This poem was very well written and it flowed really nicely, too. I think you did a really great job on writing it. You expressed yourself very well. 5/5


  • 14 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Excellently written poem, with a lot of greatly expressed emotions in it. You did absolutely superb job with rhymes, the flow of this poem is perfect!
    My favorite lines are:
    -Since you didn't want me on your friendship's train
    Then why have you put my soul on a chain?
    And why have you sealed my heart and brain?
    I know no happiness I only know the pain-

    Keep up :)
    Excellent job!
    5/5 from me

  • 14 years ago

    by Janessa

    Hello my real name is janessa....i really like this poem....keep up the great work friend

  • 14 years ago

    by ABrookeD

    Wow this is really deep. Great job. Very expressive. Keep it up. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Meme

    I can really realte to this poem
    I once got through the samething with my best friend

    Hope u feel good now;)

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Hi sweetie,
    Love your poem but the last line...shouldn't it be like this:
    Can't you see how hard it will be for me now to be happy again?
    Well, see for yourself it's a beautiful poem anyway!
    5/5 from your sis lol

  • 14 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    The rhymes are great. Surely amazed me!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Ocean Soul

    Beautiful poem
    I reallu like it

  • 14 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    I can't say, but it's greatest poem I ever read! Beauitful written! Strongly emotion and sadly word went through amazing. You're awesome! U are so pure writtterrr! I love it a lot!!

  • 14 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    "Can't you see how much pain you made me gain?
    Can't you see how hard for me now to be happy again?" - great lines

    i love your wording. its so moving and refreshing. your an amazing writer!!

    Taegan Emily

  • 14 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Omg these feelings are soo strong... great poem5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    Wow...well expressed pain...really nice...hope things get better wit you..

  • 14 years ago

    by ILoveRobbie

    I really like this poem it's really good. 5/5 Keep up the good work. Comment some of my poems!! Thanks Neely

  • 14 years ago

    by Alexa Eudis

    Great poem. i love the rhyming at the end of every line, very unique

  • 14 years ago

    by CWG

    Very emotional poem. Good Job!