Won't Do All These Things

by Aimael   Aug 20, 2007


You can feel miserable and I won't hold or comfort you
You can dress up and I won't say you look nice too
You can ask me for coffee and I won't take your cup
You can throw your clothes and I won't pick them up
You can make a mistake and I won't say it's OK
You can have a nightmare and I won't take it away

You can ask where I've been but I won't stick to you as glue
You can silently chastise me but I won't take the clue
You can greet me in the street and I wont tell you hi
You can get sacked from your job and I won't want to know why
You can give me a shy smile but I won't take the ring
You can demand an explanation and I won't say a thing

I won't do all these things, and do you want to know why?
When I asked for you to care, you didn't even try.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Em

    Jag blev glad ner jag leste denna... very nice...

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Some places, some fields your expressions goes in an attractive manner which I can't describe you. So with one words I say that you have professional ideas of writing more lovely poems and that I will be looking forward same.. 5/5

    Nazeer

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSilentlyScreamingxx

    I really enjoyed reading this poem :)

    The flow was good and the repetition in the lines worked really well. I really liked the ending, it gave a good twist at the end.

    Keep it up!

    Amy x

  • 16 years ago

    by kitkat girl

    This is a good poem!! I like how you repeated, You can, in your poem.
    keep writing
    peace
    soffe