Suspicion Kills Love

by Alissa   Aug 20, 2007


A feeling of complete bitter disgust,
almost crawling up my spine.
Pinching at my back,
ripping the flesh off my bones.

The heat forms in my eyes,
when jealousy trickles down my neck.
Such an unwanted sensation
growing inside of me.

Questions start to form in my head,
like an unexpected infestation.
Following every thought,
killing my heart slowly.

Sadness seems to hold me,
even when words of comfort enter.
My mind so filled with anger,
I won't allow sweetness to come.

Doubt stalks me under my nose,
sometimes staring face on.
Yet no evidence is clear,
and suspicion tackles all emotions.

Yes, maybe I am jealous.
Feeling myself start to cling hard.
Hoping like hell that I'm wrong,
that it really is just suspicion.

But darling my love,
today you hurt my heart.
I felt unwanted in every way,
and I just want to disappear.

This feeling must leave soon,
for if it doesn't....
I'm afraid I won't defeat it,
and I'm forced to leave.

For there isn't room,
for both me and jealousy.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    One of the best poems I have read :)

    The wordings are great and it has a strong flow. The message is clear and very obvious :)

    You have well structured it and written it well 5/5

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by gleizza

    You expressed your feelings well.....the way you express your emotion really inspired me....actually, i have added your poem to my favorite poems......

  • 16 years ago

    by Atrum Dominatio Donum ut is Letalis of Regnum

    Very nice poem, I like it alot. Very well written. Good portrayal of emotions and feelings throughout.

    5/5 Well done :)

    Dave.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I really enjoyed this poem you pulled of non-rhyming really well which was great. Quite deep I really found you wrote this into great depth which hit my heart well done on that it takes a great poem to be able to do that. Well done loved it keep up the good work definitly the best I've read of you so far. Deserves a 5/5 in my eyes. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    I loved this poem! flow was great and i think everyone can relate to the feeling of jealousy and how it can corrupt a person and their feelings towards their love..great write..keep up the good work!

    Amie

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