Your Heart Is So Restricting

by Michelle18   Aug 21, 2007


Your love is addicting,
Like a game I'm destine to win.
But your heart is so restricting,
Almost impossible for me to come in.

Why do you keep it locked,
Like a treasure chest full of gold?
Why wont you keep it open,
And give it to me to hold?

I promise not to break it,
I'll cherish it with every piece that completes me.
It'll be forever safe,
From the meaningless girl who tries to defeat me.

So are you ready to love?
Do you now give me your heart?
How about we both love together,
And make an everlasting start.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Today this is the best I've read of yours. I loved the title I have used it as one of my poems also which isn't posted on this site. The flow was quite good much better in this. I liked the meaning behind it. Well done on creating an interesting poem which didn't bore me what so ever. 5/5 ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Curry

    Okay wow this reminds me of a certain boyy who should not be mentioned because well i hate him =) well i dont but i should..*cough* bobby *cough* haha anyways wonderful poem for sure!!!1 great flow & all. 5/5

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