She Devil

by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX   Aug 21, 2007


I have wings of the darkness
And a heart of pure stone
I have horns of the devil
And no place to call my home
I have a tail thats long and thin
With a point upon the end
I watch everyone around me
Not one I call my friend
There stands a young girl
And in her hair there is a bow
She doesn't hate me because
I'm just an angel with no halo

This is a poem I wrote hoping to turn it into a song.....this is what i have so far..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Deep poem, well written, the last line.. wooooweeee. i like that, you went out with a bang :] the start of the poem just shouts at you to READ ME!

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Wow. Amazing. The beginning really drew me in. And this piece was very nicely written and well thought out. :] And you ended it really well. The last line was. .unforgettable. :] 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I think this would make a wonderful song! I really liked all the descriptive words. The flow was pretty good, but I bet it was sound better as a song. Awsome job!

    Cayce xx

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Very nice,itll be a great song!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    The I have I watch ect.
    That got a little to repetitive
    try to take those out
    it makes the poem sound
    a lot better
    5/5
    kaila

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