Your Voice

by Kayla   Aug 22, 2007


I haven't seen you in weeks,
I haven't spoken to you in days,
I haven't heard your name in hours..
Even so, I still love you the same.

Baby, you're my Prince Charming,
My Knight in Shining Armor.
The light of my life,
The only one for me.

When you finally call me,
I suddenly get dizzy,
I think I'm about to faint.
My heart races as I grab my phone,
I almost cry when I hear your sweet voice finally.

You've been on vacation,
You tell me you missed me like crazy.
I just smile and laugh,
You have no idea how much I needed to hear you again.

We get ready to hang up,
I sigh and want to cry.
You tell me you'll call me back later,
Because you need to be with your lover.
You tell me what I needed to hear the most,
You tell me that you love me.
I smile and say I love you too.
This goofy smile may not leave my face for awhile,
Because I remember that I love you.
Oh my baby, I truly love you!

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I wrote this poem just a few minutes ago because my boyfriend Ray went on vacation 6 days ago and I haven't heard from him since. Finally, he called me and said he had been busy and his dad got mad when he used the phone. He promised he'd call me back later though because he really needs to be with me =) I was so happy!! I grabbed a pen and paper as soon as we hung up and wrote this. I hope you all liked it! Thanks for reading!

8/22/07

~Rikku~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    There isn't much to say.
    except that it was a great poem.
    there isn't one line that i would change.
    Loved it!
    xoxo
    --Chelsey

  • 16 years ago

    by OneLastKissBeforeIGo

    I loved it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Yuna

    Wow the feelings expressed in this poem were so real and so powerful! One after the other, happy, sad, excited, dizzy... so many, and in the end you tied it together so nicely! I love the different ways you described him and it overall was a masterpiece. I can tell that you love him because you were able to write this piece of art right after talking to him. You had all the ideas and all the emotions right there in that moment. Great job! And keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow you must really have a great guy such a wonderful write i remember feeling like this 5/5